Today I want to point you to a fantastic blog post by Jeff Brooks over at the Moceanic blog.
Jeff writes about one particular letter…
I’m going to show you a four-page direct mail appeal I wrote awhile back. I had an unusually strong story to work with, and I was tempted to over-focus on it by using the techniques of creative writing and journalism. Fortunately, I caught myself in time and turned it back into a fundraising message.
I’m encouraging you to read this because the letter is very good, and it’s always good to be exposed to effective fundraising. And because, as Jeff walks you through the letter, he also shares helpful lessons about how to tell stories that move people to give.
Steven Screen is Co-Founder of The Better Fundraising Company and lead author of its blog. With over 30 years' fundraising experience, he gets energized by helping organizations understand how they can raise more money. He’s a second-generation fundraiser, a past winner of the Direct Mail Package of the Year, and data-driven.