Approach to Appeals

Appeal.

This month we’re sharing the ideas and strategies that had an outsized positive impact on the nonprofits we serve. 

Today’s idea is that there’s an approach to appeals (appeal letters and e-appeals) that, in our experience, tend to work the best.

Here’s the simplest summary of what the performance data leads us to believe:

  • The most successful appeals tend to be about the help that your beneficiaries or cause needs now, and how the donor’s gift will provide that help.
  • The less successful appeals tend to be about help that the organization has already provided, and request support for the organization.

When organizations change their appeals to be about the help that’s needed, and how the donor’s gift will help provide it, two things happen.  First, each appeal raises more money.  Second, the organization retains more donors year-over year.

Put another way, they start raising more money in the short term and in the long term.

Of course, appeals like this are only one element in an effective donor communications plan.  And they take a lot of thought to create.  For instance, appeals like this only describe part of an organization’s work.  You have to choose which part of your work to talk about, and you have to talk about it in an accessible way.

But if you create appeals that follow this approach, you’ll start raising more money immediately.

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For Overcoming the Resistance, We Thank You

Overcome.

There are a LOT of reasons not to ask for money.

At a conference earlier this year, we asked people to share what their biggest challenge in fundraising was.  The following list is just a small sample of the resistance that many fundraisers must overcome in order to ask for support…

  • “I’ve worked from age 10 to pay my way in life so it’s hard to ask for money”
  • “Being very new and not knowing where to start and expecting people to say no”
  • “My boss and his ideas”
  • “Fear about making a direct ask”
  • “Knowing how much to share due to the traumatic nature of our work”
  • “We have a private community that doesn’t want their photos taken or their story touted due to cultural tradition”
  • “Being too timid or just being intimidated by asking”
  • “Being new and don’t want to do something wrong”
  • “Managing all the tasks grants, major gifts, events etc. all by myself”
  • “Amount of permission / reviewers of fundraising pieces”
  • “I am a quiet person”
  • “Having the courage to talk about emotional stakes of children dying”
  • “Lack of any personal connection with our audience”
  • “My organization has a general unspoken theory of don’t ask”

There’s a lot that holds people and organizations back from asking for support.

So if you and your organization sent out fundraising this year-end, you overcame the resistance.  You overcame the fears, the bosses, and the hurdles.

You showed vulnerability and courage.

You served your beneficiaries or cause, and you served your donors.

Thank you.

The Lesson

Simplicity.

Years ago I served an organization that was raising about $350,000 per year from their individual donors.

They had a belief that they needed to share all of their programs, and show how those programs worked together to “solve the whole problem,” in order for donors to give gifts.  Their belief resulted in fundraising that spent significant time describing their programs and how their programs worked together.

I advised them that they needed to keep things simpler.  I suggested that they focus an e-appeal on one specific program.

They pushed back:

“We’re not a simple organization like one of those big national organizations you work with.  What we do is complex.”

I explained to them the lesson I had learned over the years: that the big national organizations have sophisticated approaches and programs, but that they purposefully keep their fundraising simple and emotional in order to make their organization more accessible to more people.

Those big organizations want everybody to be able to donate, not just the people who are interested enough to learn about their programs.

The organization I was working with had assumed that because the fundraising to individual donors was simple, the organization and its programs must be simple. 

But the lesson is that those big organizations appear simple because of a conscious messaging choice.  In their fundraising to individual donors, they choose to focus on single programs or simple outcomes because doing so is proven to help them attract more new donors and raise more money from current donors.

Sophisticated fundraising looks simple on purpose.

The Messaging Tactic You Can Learn from Political Fundraising

Prevent bad outcomes.

There’s a messaging tactic that small nonprofits can learn from the political fundraising this election season.

(And by the way, you’re probably as tired of political fundraising as I am.  But let’s separate our tiredness from a tactic we can learn from.)

The tactic is telling your donors what their gift will stop from happening.

You see this in political fundraising when you’re told that “a gift will stop the other party from gaining power.”  Or “you’ll stop some bad thing from happening.”  You get it.

This is a message that most small nonprofits don’t take advantage of enough.  We constantly talk about the things that the donor’s gift will make possible.  But we forget to say the things that the gift stops from happening.

Take child sponsorship for example.  Classic child sponsorship marketing tells people that their gift will provide an education for the child, provide food for the child, provide access to medical care for the child.  All of those things are outcomes that the gift will make possible.

But that misses a whole slew of things that the gift stops from happening that are powerful and motivating!

For instance, when a young girl is sponsored and stays in school, she doesn’t become a child bride.  Sponsoring a boy means he stays in school and doesn’t enter the drug trade.  Sponsoring any child means they stay under the eyes of loving adults and don’t get caught up in sexual trafficking.

Each of those is highly motivating to donors.  And I think you can see how using this messaging tactic would make for fundraising that more people would respond to.

So I ask you, in addition to telling donors what their gift to your organization will make happen, do you tell your donors the negative things that their gift stops from happening?

When you do, you will have given your donors additional powerful reasons to give a gift today.  And in my experience, that has two powerful results:

  • Donors have a better picture of your organization’s work and what their gift accomplishes.
  • You raise more money.

Beliefs, and Their Effects on Annual Plans

Beliefs lead to success.

An organization’s beliefs about fundraising will shape their fundraising plans.

For instance…

If you Believe

that a large percentage
of your individual
donors would love to
make multiple gifts
each year…

Then you create

an annual plan that
regularly asks donors
to give…

Which results in

a large percentage
of donors making
multiple gifts.

How are your organization’s beliefs shaping your annual plan?

Shortfall Story

Shortall story.

My last post was about why sharing a shortfall with your donors is good for revenue and your relationships with donors.

That’s a challenging, counter-intuitive idea.  So because we humans learn through stories, let me share the story of how one nonprofit navigated their shortfall situation.

Here’s how it went…

Opening Up to a New Idea

Years ago, a nonprofit we were serving let us know that they had a $500,000 shortfall as they approached the end of their fiscal year. 

We recommended that they share the shortfall with their donors by running a shortfall campaign. 

The conversation that followed went through the standard steps that most of these conversations go through…

First, they told us that sharing their shortfall was a ridiculous idea.  They shared that their organization is a pillar in their community.  They were worried that making the shortfall public would negatively affect their brand.  They were worried that donors would think the organization was a bad steward of their gifts.  They were worried that – even if some donors gave a gift to help – that overall it would cause more donors to stop giving to the organization.

We listened.  And then we shared that we knew from experience, having run 60 to 70 successful shortfall campaigns, that their donors would give generously if the organization included the shortfall in their messaging.  And we shared that, in our experience, the organization would not suffer any of the negative consequences that they feared. 

Feeling slightly warmer to the idea but still unconvinced, they said what most organizations say at this point, which is, “Well, there’s no way that will work with our donors because [REASONS].”  The reasons tend to be things like, “Our donors are different than other donors” or “this won’t work because all our donors know our founder” or “our donors are professionals and won’t fall for this” (as if there’s something to fall for?!?) and, my personal favorite, “all our donors are from [location] and people from [location] don’t like things like this.”

So we said, “We hear you and acknowledge that these are real concerns.  Could we share an example of a shortfall campaign from an organization similar to yours?  It worked well for them and we think it would work well for you.” 

They replied, “Yes we’d love to see the example… but we have to tell you that our boss isn’t going to like it.” 

So, I had a warm conversation with the Director of Donor Development.  She was open to the idea, found our experience persuading, and decided it was worth talking about. 

This leads to the final step, which is moving up the chain of command to have a conversation with the VP or ED/CEO who can make the final decision.  In this case, I spent an hour on the phone with the VP of Philanthropy.  She’s a brilliant woman and had all the concerns mentioned earlier – in part because she was very good at fundraising and had never experienced a shortfall before.

I talked her through several shortfall campaigns I’d been through.  I shared all the positive reasons that donors respond to shortfalls.  I shared results of previous shortfall campaigns compared to standard results. 

It was basically an hour-long counselling session.  People in Fundraising tend to have deeply held beliefs about what their donors will and will not respond to.  And I was warmly sharing some data that challenged this person’s beliefs.  There were hundreds of thousands of dollars on the line, and relationships with very large donors, so we talked it all the way through. 

The VP of Philanthropy bought in, and then met with the Board to get approval.  After much discussion, the Board nervously decided to try it. 

The Campaign

It was time to get to work.  Here’s what we did:

  • We planned out a 6-week campaign that ended when their fiscal year ended.
  • The campaign had two direct mail letters, 8 emails, and phone calls to major donors.
  • I wrote up talking points about the shortfall.  These included how the shortfall happened, what the consequences would be if it wasn’t erased, and what the organization was doing about it.
  • The talking points were distributed to the Board, to Major Gifts Officers who were calling major donors, and to the people answering the phones. 
  • I wrote the direct mail appeal letter that kicked off the campaign.  We used the thinking and messaging in the letter to craft the follow-up letter, the emails, website copy, and giving page copy.
  • The messaging was clear and to the point: through no fault of their own, the organization was facing a $500,000 shortfall.  We shared what would happen if they couldn’t erase the shortfall.  We shared the good work the donor’s gift would help make possible.  Then we asked the donor to send in a special gift to help erase the shortfall.

The people were prepped.  The letters were mailed.  The emails were sent.  It was time to see what happened…

The Results

Their fiscal year-end campaign normally raised about $150,000, and our campaign raised about $650,000.  That’s an “extra” $500,000 that effectively erased the shortfall.

It doesn’t always work out that perfectly, but it does more often than you’d expect.  The major donors who get involved often want to know how much is needed to reach the goal.  They will often stretch their giving to help you reach the target number.

In addition to the overall success, there are few numbers I’d like to highlight:

  • The response rates to the direct mail and emails were notably higher than average.
  • Their average gift sizes were higher than normal.
  • The organization had about 100,000 donors at the time, and they had a total of five donors reach out to them to ask about the shortfall.  Five!
    • Two of the five people who reached out were Board members who had already been briefed on the shortfall.  (Yes, that is as ridiculous as it sounds.)
    • In the five conversations, after hearing more details about what was going on, two of the five people gave a gift on the spot.

In addition, none of the feared negative consequences came to pass.  This shortfall was a few years ago, and the organization now has about 25% more donors than they used to.  Their major gifts program is going great.  They’ve also successfully funded a significant capital campaign.

Their brand was not tarnished.  Their standing the community remains strong.  Their donors did not leave in a thundering herd.

The Lesson

This whole thing is a lesson in the power of vulnerability.

The organization was vulnerable and courageous enough to share the shortfall with their donors.  Their donors responded generously, and were pleased to help the organization in their time of need.  There were no negative consequences to speak of. 

The organization has a deeper appreciation of their donors than ever before; the organization needed help, and their donors answered the call.

All of this is to say, if you have a shortfall don’t be afraid to share it with your donors.

Share Your Shortfall

Share shortfall.

Here’s a “hot take” for you:

If your organization has a shortfall, I encourage you to share it with your donors.  Sharing it will be good for your fundraising and donor relationships, both in the short term and the long term.

I know that sounds absurd to many people.  But this is a data-driven position.

Sharing a shortfall with your donors is a scary idea for many nonprofits.  Doing it usually requires a big shift in thinking.  So this is a longer post than normal.  I’m going to explain what we’ve noticed about three things:

  1. Why sharing a shortfall seems like an obvious bad idea
  2. The results when nonprofits run shortfall campaigns
  3. Why we think shortfall campaigns work so well

We want you to get past the fear because of what’s on the other side…

“There’s no way this is a good idea”

Let’s start by talking for a moment about why sharing a shortfall feels somewhere between dangerous and dumb.  Here’s what “common sense” tells you about sharing a shortfall with your donors:

  • It would reflect poorly on your organization and your brand.
  • It will look like you’re bad at managing money.
  • People won’t give.  (After all, if they think you are bad at managing money, why would they give you another gift?!?)
  • Even if sharing a shortfall somehow brought in a bunch of money, there will be negative consequences in the future that will far overshadow any revenue that comes in now.

Furthermore, no one likes how it feels to send out a shortfall message.  Everyone working at the nonprofit, or leading the nonprofit, or on the Board will feel like the shortfall reflects poorly on them.

All of this makes sense.

And let’s add one more layer: no one ever talks about the results of their shortfall campaign.  Have you ever been to a conference where a fundraising professional was up on stage talking about how well their shortfall campaign went?  Nope.

There’s so much shame around this that no one talks about it.

Then we add the branding and marketing folks who don’t really understand how vulnerability is such a big part of fundraising success, and they actively push back on mentioning that the organization has a shortfall.

So we’re in a situation where people think shortfall campaigns are a bad idea, no one likes them, and no one talks about the results.

But in my experience, the vast majority of people have never seen the results of a shortfall campaign.  They just aren’t aware that…

Shortfall Campaigns Work Great & Don’t Have Negative Consequences 

This idea is so counter-intuitive that, until you have experience with multiple shortfall campaigns, there’s almost no way you’ll believe it.

But it’s true; fundraising campaigns that focus on helping an organization overcome a shortfall work great.  And they do not cause the negative consequences that people fear.

I estimate that I’ve helped on between 60 to 70 shortfall campaigns.  They’ve been for organizations of all different sizes and in all different sectors.  Here’s what happens:

  • Donors respond in droves.  The letter / email / campaign is usually the second-highest fundraising campaign of the year, behind only the year-end campaign.  Often it’s the best campaign of the year, or the best campaign the organization has ever run.
    • The response rates are higher than average, the size of gifts are higher than average.
  • The feared negative consequences do not happen, either in the short term or long term.  I’ve measured; they don’t happen.
    • I can’t emphasize this enough: in 30+ years of fundraising and measuring results, I have never seen a reduction in long-term giving or retention rates as a result of letting donors know you have a shortfall.  All of the things we fear – donors leaving in a thundering herd, donors complaining to the Chamber of Commerce, donors telling all their friends not to give – just don’t happen.
  • There will be five or fewer conversations with concerned donors or Board members.  And when the situation is explained to them, about half of them will give you a gift on the spot and be happy they did.

Notice I’m not saying, “shortfall campaigns always raise enough to erase the shortfall.”  I’m saying that they always raise quite a bit more than an organization’s “standard” fundraising, and don’t have the negative consequences that people fear.  And the campaign will erase the entire shortfall more often than you think.

Those are the numbers.  Water is wet, the world is round, shortfall campaigns work great.

“I still don’t believe you… but if I did, how is this possible?”

I’ve thought about this a lot.  Here’s my take on the powerful mix of reasons shortfall campaigns raise so much more money than an organization’s “regular” fundraising.  And I suspect that, even though you might not totally believe my main thesis yet, you’ll look at this list and see how it makes sense:

  • Your donors care about your organization, and about your beneficiaries or cause. 
  • Donors do not want your organization to be forced to reduce services.  And they know that’s what can happen when there’s a shortfall – you’ll have to cut programs or staff.
  • Donors quickly understand the problem you’re having – all of us have had a “shortfall” of our own at some point in our lives.
  • Humans respond to clear needs.  Witness the recent giving to help the victims of Helene and Milton.  And a shortfall is a clear need.
  • Your donors know you’re a nonprofit.  They know you don’t have all the money, and they know that funding can be hard to come by sometimes.
  • Oftentimes, when an organization shares a shortfall, it’s the first time they’ve Asked their donors in a way that makes it very clear that help is needed now.  The contrast between the urgent ask and the regular fundraising (“Things are going great, we’ve helped so many people, it would be lovely if you considered partnering with us”) makes donors see and feel that their help is needed now.
  • Humans love to help, and helping feels good.

All of those ring true, right?

Put all of them together and you can begin to see why donors respond so generously when an organization shares that they have a shortfall. 

Should you go looking for a shortfall?  No.  Should you share a shortfall four times a year?  No again.

But when you have a shortfall, trust that your donors care, and share it with them.  You’ll be so glad you did.  Your donors will be glad you did, too, because they love helping you.

In my next post, I’ll share a story of an organization that had a shortfall, had all of the perfectly normal concerns about sharing that shortfall with their donors, and decided to run a shortfall campaign.

Your Uniqueness is the Eighth Most Important Thing

Unique penguin.

A lot of smaller nonprofits believe that sharing their uniqueness will cause them to have fundraising success.

But in my experience, when an organization talks about their uniqueness in their fundraising to individual donors, it causes them to raise less.  (In fact, when we start working with organizations that have been making a big deal of their uniqueness, we stop mentioning it and they start raising more money.)

Here’s the deal: there’s nothing wrong with uniqueness, and it’s an important idea in a couple of contexts; but in your letters and emails to individual donors it’s something like the 8th most important idea.

Here’s an off-the-cuff list of things that are more important to get right in your fundraising to individual donors than mentioning your organization’s uniqueness:

  1. Earning and keeping the donor’s attention
  2. Sharing the situation the beneficiaries or cause are in today
  3. Sharing the size of a gift a donor needs to give to make a meaningful difference
  4. Sharing what the donor’s gift will do to help
  5. Sharing how the donor’s past gift made a difference
  6. Making the letter/email effective for both Readers and Scanners
  7. Making it clear that the donor’s gift is needed

If you’ve done all seven of those things well, and adding a mention of your uniqueness doesn’t diminish any of those seven, then by all means talk about it. 

The lesson we’ve learned looking at fundraising results over the years is that uniqueness matters most to insiders and experts.  For instance, your unique approach is often a very important point to include in a grant application.

But when you’re talking to your individual donors – the vast majority of whom aren’t insiders or experts – the results make it clear that there are other, more important messages to communicate first.

Is Your Email List Trained to Give or to Receive?

Donate.

Follow me on this one…

  1. Once people are on your email list, you want them to give you a gift. 
  2. If they don’t give you a gift, you want them off your list.
  3. Because the best way to get people on your email list to become donors is to regularly send e-appeals, you should send e-appeals regularly.

The purpose of your email list is a step towards making a donation.  Your email list is place for people who are interested to find out a bit more about your organization and then to decide whether to become a donor or not.

So be sure you’re asking them regularly – I’d recommend at least one e-appeal per month asking them to help your beneficiaries or cause.

This will cause the occasional unsubscribe.  It will also cause far more people to “take the next step” and make a donation. 

For instance, you could send out an e-appeal and get 5 new donors and 1 unsubscribe.  That’s preferrable to sending another e-news and getting… nothing.

If you don’t regularly ask your email list to give, your email list will be larger but it will not produce much revenue or many new donors. 

You will have trained your email list to receive things from your nonprofit, but not to give to your nonprofit.

Our recommendation: conversations about your email list should center on “Revenue” and “# New Donors”… not size.